The Hunt

The island we live on is rich in ancient legends.  We’re going to find out if they’re true.  We are a group of five kids who are desperate for adventure.

We arrived at the cave on the beach looking for treasure.  We all talked at once about what to spend the gold on.  Suddenly Robert shrieked,

“Guys, I found something!”

We rushed to his side and peered into the hole.  It was a box with the letters R.I.P. carved into the top.

“What does R.I.P. mean?” I asked.

Robert pulled up the box, opened it and said,

“Ah darn, it’s just old bones!?”

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12 Comments

  1. snagglewordz said,

    May 13, 2012 at 5:23 am

    Fun! Another famous five just waiting for their break. I love that there are always undiscovered treasures for kids to find, because they have fresh eyes on old things. Love the name of you blog BTW!

    • prosingon said,

      May 13, 2012 at 6:21 am

      As Ellen DeGeneres would say, right back at ya! Snaggle Wordz is a good one too! Fresh eyes is exactly right. Thanks for taking the time to comment with kind, encouraging wordz, it is, after all, why we’re all here.

      • snagglewordz said,

        May 14, 2012 at 3:38 am

        🙂

  2. Sandra said,

    May 12, 2012 at 5:10 am

    I half expected a voice to ring out “it might be old bones to you boy, but it’s what’s left of my life…” A pity that they didn’t realise what a treasure they’d found. Nice one.

    • prosingon said,

      May 12, 2012 at 6:47 am

      Thanks alot Sandra. Herein lies the value of taking the time to comment. Have you watched the Disney movie The Lion King? That voice you heard ringing out played, in my mind, as the voice of Scar (Jeremy Irons), King Mufasa’s evil brother. Then my mind raced down the thread of a story line where the party of kids discover what they had really discovered. Writing rocks doesn’t it? lol Thanks kiddo!

  3. Judee said,

    May 10, 2012 at 2:00 am

    Love that last line and the fact that the kids didn’t realize what RIP meant.

    • prosingon said,

      May 10, 2012 at 6:19 am

      Thanks for taking the time to comment Judee! I love to look at things from the uncomplicated minds of kids!

  4. May 9, 2012 at 2:21 pm

    Great start to an adventure.

  5. Jonesingafter40 said,

    May 9, 2012 at 9:42 am

    Good one. I looked at the prompt and didn’t get any good ideas… Way to go!

    • prosingon said,

      May 9, 2012 at 10:32 am

      Thanks Jonesie! I was looking for your post on this one. Maybe you don’t relate to old bones! lol

  6. May 9, 2012 at 9:28 am

    A great little mystery piece there.


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